Personal note about 'The Seven Nations'

'The Seven Nations' is a more current story which I first concocted in my mind in late 2007. It started off with my love of the TV show 'Avatar: The Last Airbender'. I loved that show as it was coming out (Still do!) and thought it would be sweet to have bending powers. (It's the nerd in me right there) That year I also got dumped, hard. It wasn't pleasant, and unkind things were said, which I in fact use in the story. So, I came up with the very first concepts of the Princess and Prince Finigan as she uses her powers to totally kick his trash. Then, as time passed, I began to feel hope for love again and I knew there was still someone out there, someone better, waiting for me. Thus the rest of the story was born. I didn't write much on it though back in 2008, just the first few pages and a scene here and there when I got bored in lectures etc. But this year I got back on it and it all pulled together, the history, the characters, and my final choice for the climax as I had been tossing between several endings before then, but the one I chose is the one that fits best with the Princess' growth and personality.
So, I'm really looking for feedback on this one, it is my best story yet and I want to know what people think about it. It's also much longer than previous stories as there is a lot more going on as I created a whole world and it's history and landscape. I will be posting the map I drew as well.
Now, sit back and enjoy, 'The Seven Nations'.

The Phantom Series over!

Finally, they are complete! I hope you enjoyed them, and watching my writing style grow and change, as well as my twisted pubescent mind. :-D It was fun going through them again, remembering my life at the time I wrote them, and all the people who made the characters in my mind. I have some fond memories of those times and people and I love that I can visit them again when I read these stories.
I will eventually get 'The Phantom in Vienna' written and post it once I do.
Let me know what you thought of 'The Phantom Series' by leaving a comment here or on facebook.